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The mertailor who made my mermaid tail has been pulling some horrible crap on customers and online. It inspired me to write a song.

The story goes, a merman comes ashore to teach humans about the ocean but when he gets here he gets so caught up in the human ways of greed he forgets about the ocean.

This is an incredibly rough draft, we're talking recorded seconds after writing. I post stuff like this because I value the input but please remember when critiquing how rough this is and consider critiquing in the same manor you would a sketch or design.

Lyrics:
Verse 1 and 2

A merman came ashore with a dr-eam
to turn fiction into re-al-ity
he started working he was only 15
where did the merman go?

Working hard and learning the trade
growing up and getting afraid
paranoid of being betrayed
where did the merman go?

Chorus
And I know I know you lost your innocence
I know I know it's gone
I know I know you traded for the world
all those pretty things wont keep you warm (your pretty merman song)

Verse 3 and 4

taking time and getting the flow
where did the years all go?
You were swimming now you're walking around
your feet dont even make a sound

Had big dreams of sharing your world
but too long in ours had you unfurled
forgot your ways and your people too
what are the mermaids supposed to do?

Chorus
And I know I know you lost your innocence
I know I know it's gone
I know I know you traded for the world
all those pretty things wont keep you warm (your pretty merman song)

Outro
but it's not too late to go back home
don't you know the sea is calling?
second chances no need to be alone
I can tell your soul is breaking...
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dolphinzr0k May 29, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
@01:08._. not what i was expecting :)
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Hogwarts-Girls Apr 26, 2012  Student Artisan Crafter
@01:02AWESOME! love ur vocie
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larissathehedgewolf Apr 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
@02:35Wow! your awesome :D
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:iconraine-angel:
@02:35oh this is soooo old and poor quality haha I gotta get around to updating
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larissathehedgewolf Apr 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
@02:35i still think ur an awesome singer and guitar player :D
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SophieLuana Nov 30, 2010  Student Digital Artist
@02:29great voice : D
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RottaRice Nov 17, 2010
@02:34You're my hero :,D
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Sketchbomb Nov 16, 2010  Professional Filmographer
NICE.
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:iconraine-angel:
@02:34ppppppft. Hardly. But thanks. :hug:
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