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Well, I have had very little exposure to reptiles before today. A reptile rescue group visited the childrens center where I work today and I sure had so much fun! I've always been a bit nervous around reptiles, but these ones really won me over.

This here was a friendly Iguana... I forget the name sorry! He crawled all over me and would leap on the kids off us. LOL. He was super cool. I really liked him. What a great opportunity for the kids too!

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:icontodd-centric:
I like this, although I would've added a little more aperture to allow the eyes to be in focus. Maybe f/2.2 or a little higher. I'd be fine with the rest of the image being blurry and in the bokeh.

Unfortunately, the high ISO shows the grain a lot. I like grain sometimes, but with the Iguana having a lot of beautiful surface detail that is one of it's trademarks, I find my eyes being drawn around the whole image and the grain is a little excessive. The ISO level also degrades the Bokeh, which seems to be in important quality here.

I would've attempted to create more ambient light on your little friend here. That would've enabled you to crank down the ISO, to say 1000. And/or, you could've used a tripod and used ISO 1000 or less in AV mode on your Canon. Since reptiles tend to sit still for long periods, a tripod would've worked well. I'm a fellow Canon lover, too. And, I've taken non-flash lit subjects a lot, too. If you have an external Canon Speedlight that is rather new, you also could've used manual mode and set the light output at 1/128 power. I use this a lot now, so I can illuminate close subjects without the flash being really obvious.

As I call it a lot with my low aperture photos, the subject is coming "out of the Bokeh"! Please look at my Macro images.

Please don't take my critique negatively. I'm not being negative. I still take photos exactly like this, but with the addition of a few tweaks I mention above.

Love,

Todd

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The focus on this photo is certainly intriguing. So much of the iguana is out-of-focus, that the heads almost appears to be peering through some sort-of dimensional gateway. Whether that was the intend effect, it still came out very done. The parts that are in focus are so clear and crisp, that it really feels like the iguana is just about ready to jump off of the screen.

The blue tones in the background play well against the color of the iguana's body. Overall this is a very good photograph, and somehow the lack of background focus is what brings this piece alive and makes it so entrancing to look at it.
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:iconjpcespedes:
The good thing about taking photos of reptiles is that they're all poseurs; unlike dogs, cats or babies who are always moving and trying to eat the camera, these guys stay calm looking at you.
But talent is still needed to take a picture like this.
:iconkuroinusama69:
This a really cool shot .

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:iconechomrg:
wow! that's really a great image! :nod:
for me the high ISO noise is not such a big problem: there's enough texture in the picture that the noise isn't too noticeable.
but i agree with Todd about trying to get the eye in focus :nod:

anyway, it's really an amazing shot! :nod:

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:iconel-e:
very interesting photo:D
:icongamebalance:
Geeez fkn christ how just ppl can do such great work with color ???? Awesome!

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haha thanks! I leave that up to the photographer though. I think we lucked out since my hair coordinated so well with everything else ;)

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Jul 1, 2009, 11:03:37 PM

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